Destin Jones
I woke up breathing heavily. Panting. Scared. My
heart is being out of m chest. I had just a dream, about me Hell. I glance at
the clock at 5:30 a.m. I think “I’m going to get saved today”. I get up and
walk to the book shelf and grab the deep blue bible and open it up to St.
Matthew and read about Jesus Birth. Its 8:30 now, I walk to the bathroom shower
and put on my clothes. I am ready. Ready to be saved.
I answer certain of myself “yes” The church
explodes in applause as another sinner had reached salvation.
When the Pastor dismissed the church, I was mobbed
by friends, family, and fellow church members congratulated me on my new found
salvation
saying things like “I’ve never would see this day”,
“I’ m proud of you”.
I sense of pride about my new found salvation. I’m
greeted by my mother and she whispers “I’m proud.
It’s
hard to resist temptation after being saved. I feel like I’m messing up every
day. I was back to sinning. I was lying, disobeying my parents and being mean.
I think to myself what has happened as I lie in the bed and drift off to sleep.
I
woke up breathing heavily. Panting. Scared. My heart is being out of m chest. I
had just a dream, about me Hell.
good but work on length too short and i hope you really beleive you are saved but i loved the fact that you admitted that you are a lier
ReplyDeleteShut up Iman. This is a great story.
ReplyDeleteWhat is you talkning bout dude... "Rewrite"
ReplyDeleteit is good but too short thats all add more details to how and why you choose to be saved
ReplyDeleteHmm.. I'd say this is quite related to you in a way.. You only need to review it before you publish. However, It was very interesting! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you mam :)
DeleteIman this is a good blog...its very deep... Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteThank ya
DeleteVERY GOOD Destin! Thumbs up(:
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
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